My English COMPETENCE in 2012

I can't choose anyone of my posts, because I can see enyone better that the others. But I'm obliged to do this post and I must do it. So I will choose the COMUNISM PRIMITIVE:
http://subasebolla.blogspot.com.es/2012/02/primitive-communism.html

In this one I have a good structre. To start, I give an introduction, and after I explain my arguments in support and finally, a conclussion.
The vocabulary that I use I think that it's standar and with some phrasal vers, and is in order

The oral presentation that I choose the first oral presentations.
http://subasebolla.blogspot.com.es/search/label/FIRST-TERM%20TASKS-ORAL%20PRESENTATION%202on%20Bat

This one have the same features from the other post that I chose:

It's an oral presentation with a good structure, with an intruction, a body and finally a conclution. When I talk the other people can understund mw without problems and the vocabulary is standar and in order.


In my opinion, and how I saw, I can comunicate with other people in english, and talking with the other persons I will improve my lenguage.

My English progress from 2010-2012

In these two ear of bachillerat, I learn to write in english better that before. Since the first email to the teacher and my last composition I can see that I can you more expressions, and connectors and more vocabulary. But until I don't know the perfect structure of writings, I must study it.

About my oral presentations, I think that my oral presentations have been good and ever have been the same. I'm happy for that.

When I started Bachillerat I was used to the english because I love travel a lot, and I am the composer of the songs from Asterium, my band, and we talk in english and in Latin. And I have to talk with promoters and people from the world of metal in english, and ever I'm practicing. But, I don't know the reason, in class I never talk in english. After this two years, my english is better.

COMENTS

http://mancillaspace.blogspot.com.es/2012/05/marinaleda.html?showComment=1336947710442#c3680319010383311897

http://guillecenglishspace.blogspot.com.es/2012/05/end-is-near.html?showComment=1336947982933#c4796203337281419577

http://storyofmylifealeix.blogspot.com.es/2012/05/la-republica.html?showComment=1336948233717#c3644349309160155572

UN warns about violations of children's human rights

More than 90 countries had legalized the corporal punishment, including smacking, to stone, limb's amputations to discipline children that had done a crime.

UN said that deprive of freedom children and punish them with strong punishment, mustn't be good for discipline, and it's a violation of their human rights.

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I don't know how to think about that. In my opinion we hav to punish children, but we haven't punish with strong punishment like these.

http://www.ohchr.org/en/NewsEvents/Pages/DisplayNews.aspx?NewsID=11925&LangID=E

U.N. passes resolution condemning Iran human rights abuses with record amount of votes

The UN General Assembly on Monday passed an annual resolution condemning human rights abuses in Iran with a record number of votes in support.

They condemn the use of strangle to kill condemned, the attacks to the human rights's defenders, the gender differences, and the persecution of religious minorities.

They condemn Korea for the lack of freedom and the recruitment of kids for the army.


http://www.alarabiya.net/articles/2011/11/21/178465.html

OBSESSIONS FOR PHYSICAL

When we see the history of the civilization, we can see that people have been worried about their physical. The tendencies has changes, for example, at the times of Rubbens, fat women was preferences than thin women, because was a sign of power. Now, the perfect body is the thin body.

Nowadays, the perfect body of women is an skeleton, and thats it's horrible. I think that the perfect body is with curves. 

In my opinion, people have to be how they want, and if someone loves eat fast food and he is fat, he have to be proud. It's disgraceful that be fat is something immoral.

The end...

We are on our last week of the last year. This year have been so fast and, with the last year, have been the best year. This is my 7th year at IES Castellò d'Empuries, and I have great memories of my years in ESO, but the best years have been the bachillerat years, because I have good marks and I met great persons.

Last year I passed all subjects with good marks, and this year I'm passing subjects with good marks too. I'm not worried about the mark for next year because I will study Arqueology in Barcelona, and I need just a 6/14. A lot of students are worried for selectivity, but I'm not worried because are exams about something that we done, we haven't got to study, we have to review.